Wow. I know how you feel as i live in Uxbridge and my boyfriend used to live in Derby. Very nicely written Chris. Keep up the good work.
Rosie xXx

Wow.. Absolutely fantastic. Loved it. I loved every part of this poem. It really flows..

Just a bit of a weird end. Doesn't feel finished. But oh well, that's just me haha

You are talented =P Love this poem
Keep up the good work, I'm impressed

Lotsaaa love
-xxx-

Wow!! Mr Tony should read this for sure.

loved it man...really good!!

all the best and take care
5/5 for sure

Wonderful, deep and something to think about. the reality i guess is we can make a difference!

good luck and peace
shobhana