*gasps* Wow hunny what a wonderful sad poem! Dam this is so sad. I was halfway when I decided to start over again. And when I was at the end I once again decided to start over again.

Fantastic! Well done. Very powerful that "the gentle warm breeze"comes back all the time. Makes it so dam sad. It flows, love the rhyming.
Wow.. I'm really impressed hun. Well done sweety.

Love you =)
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This is depicted so well
you can imagine the little boy & his mother
very powerful

Great job hunn...I like the way you put it..if it really happened I'm sorry for your loss...-xxx-

Stunning baby
This is one of your best
The opening and closing of this poem is sooooo powerful :D
well done
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O_o I guess I read it again =) It's so fantastic ! Love you sweety, hope to read a new poem soon =P lotsaa love -xxx-

O.o (hides) Caught myself reading this poem again ghehe =P It's just so wonderful hun, I really love this !!! =)

Lotsaaaaaa love sweety
Hope to read a new poem soony =*(
Cause I'm missing your work

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You had my in dears hon!
This was quite an excellent write if I do say so myself, I loved your wording&the ending was so sad yet how you ended you..referring back to the begining and what not...great write.xxx