Comments : Into pieces

  • 12 years ago

    by Kirsty

    I feel so sad reading this
    as i know what its about
    when i heard it broke my heart!!
    but you should have come to mine :D i would have cheered you up
    yes yes
    chin up sweetie
    lovies ya xxxxxxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is incredible! Some amazing lines throughout this poem, like:
    "Spoon fed kindness until I'm full"
    "I'd gamble my wedding finger for all I care"
    "Billy smoked my cigarettes for me although I'd happily choke down his fumes."
    Just to name a few, excellent and interesting write! I love it!