Somewhere away

by Mona   Feb 26, 2006


She hides
Until she decides
To go there
"There" might just be anywhere

Somewhere away
That's where she will stay
Anywhere away from here
But anywhere might as well be near

Just a place
Maybe an open space
Maybe a dark hole
As black as coal

Where will she stay?
Somewhere away
Where will she go?
No one will know

She will be found
If her feet hit the ground
You might find her there
And "there" might be just anywhere

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Loved this poem thanks 4 your coment meant alot take care hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Wow, this was so powerful, and I can't tell where the power came from. The whole thing was just amazing and my comments are becoming crappy because I'm running out of things to say, awesome poem, keep up the good work.

    Might as well be a dark hole
    As black as coal

    WOW. I love that line, it was so awesome, yet, the flow was a little off considering that the line "as black as coal" was a little short compared to might as well be a black hole

    Maybe you could change it to "Maybe a black hole?"

    I don't know, anyways, great write.

  • 18 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    Wow, i really like this poem. it holds your attention well:) thanks for the comment!xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    WOW!!!
    amazing mona!!
    see this is why i love you...coz all your poems make me feel something!!
    i love it
    well done huni
    xxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very interesting write, I love it! Powerfully sad, but unique! Excellent poem, a great choice of words!

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