This gave me shivers, it was written with what seemed like so much passion... it was perfect :)

heidi

Very interesting poem.you have exposed your inner feeling with this work.

All your poems are beautful , this one ,wow I realy liked it ,sounds like you put so much thought and feeling in to it .
Perfect
~April~

Jesus your writting is amazing! i cant believe how amazingly good it is! :D wow

Well i have to say that i love all of your poems lol. they are just so pure and meaningful. keep up the good work and you derserve another 5/5 lol

xoxox
jess