Wow, first of all, I see that you're a multitalented guy. I have a passion for painting and drawing, and I see that so do you. Thats great to hear.

Now, about your poem, I dont think anyone could have painted a better picture of life's worries and how to deal with it the way you did. I really liked it. You're a great writer as well, so keep it up. 5/5

Sorry, I forgot to mention, thank you so much for your kind words.
Keep in touch.

Thank you for your encouragement... I will work on my flow..... (smiling)

Thank you for your encouragement... I will work on my flow..... (smiling)

Like the other person said, the flow kind of through me off. and it didn't really speak to me, but thats not on you. peoples lives are different. it was a good poem, though. :)

btw thanks for you words. i really appreciate it. :)

Great bit of advice for those who are willing to listen.i like the simple language and the hard to miss message in this.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Very well put, we need a lot more communication.