Bravo! Bravo! You seem very good at expressing
Yourself. How long have you been writing poetry?
This person you can not call a friend. As you said
A friend is someone who loves you for you. But
The more somebody behaves you like this, the
More you should be good to them cuz thatâ€™s our
Human task. Our task isnâ€™t to be loved but to love.
Ainâ€™t it? I really loved the way you wrote this.
You seem like a really good friend.
I really loved this poem. I can realte to trying to hold on to someone so bad when they are just slipping away and making things difficult fore you. But in the end belive me its better that you let them go.. things become easier.. after time of course
This is such a wonderful poem! an i mean it too. I like the way you described how hurt you were when they rejected you. An if it meant that much to you, it WOULDN'T be something stupid. Not if you really like these people.