Comments : Crying from the Eyes and Bleeding From the Heart

  • 11 years ago

    by azlan26

    I love this poem, it reminds me of all the people at the moment who seem to want to pretend everything is alright. . .
    Keep writing =]

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I usually vote for poems I love and well I'm definately going to vote for this one. I agree with azlan26 when it comes to what it reminds me of.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marjan

    Bravo! Bravo! You seem very good at expressing
    Yourself. How long have you been writing poetry?
    This person you can not call a friend. As you said
    A friend is someone who loves you for you. But
    The more somebody behaves you like this, the
    More you should be good to them cuz that’s our
    Human task. Our task isn’t to be loved but to love.
    Ain’t it? I really loved the way you wrote this.
    You seem like a really good friend.
    Much love,
    marjan

  • 11 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Oh dear! i know how u wer feeling at that time.......but cheer up dear!
    a true friend will accept u as u r.......

    good write
    luv,
    Bharti

  • 11 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    I love this poem...it touched me..... it makes me realize that people should like you for who you are...thanks...that was a very nice poem to read!....5/5!
    ~*Linz*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    A lot of ppl can relate to apoem like this.. well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I really loved this poem. I can realte to trying to hold on to someone so bad when they are just slipping away and making things difficult fore you. But in the end belive me its better that you let them go.. things become easier.. after time of course

  • 11 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    TELL IT LIKE IT IS GURL!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    TELL IT LIKE IT IS GURL!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice poem i love it the point was great.
    keep up the good work 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Rayne

    Hey, i really like this poem. I can relate to it alot. I had a friend like that once....I hope you ditched 'em! they aren't worth it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is really good. And its so true, A true friend would love you for who you are. And im sorry to hear that this poem is based on a true feeling of yours. Keep up the great work! 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 11 years ago

    by Sora, The Lonely Poet

    This is such a wonderful poem! an i mean it too. I like the way you described how hurt you were when they rejected you. An if it meant that much to you, it WOULDN'T be something stupid. Not if you really like these people.

  • 11 years ago

    by StefQ

    I agree with natalie a true friend would love you for who you are, and it really sux when that happens to you :S but cheer up you've wrote an excellent poem ! 5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I loved this poem. it shows strong emotions, very good. keep it up! 5/5*

  • 11 years ago

    by Latasha

    This is a very good poem hun keep up the good work

    and reply to ur comment...
    - it happened to my cousins friend... in a smaller town... but yas

  • 11 years ago

    by Brett

    Nice work! you need to let this "friend" hear this... keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Excellent job.. I really really liked this one its so true.. and it seems to have alot of feeling behind it 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 11 years ago

    by Jonathan

    Wow.. really great poem. I now how you feel, i've been down that road. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Actually this is a REALLY godo illustaration sry you went through this..but i knoo i have doen this before.. think most everyone has if not for at least a brief moment or too.

    i am so glad that u were able to finally write this..this is amazing ur good pelase keep writing gurl.

    lissa