Gloria, what a beautiful poem you've done here, its awesome penned!

That's a great, heartfelt tribute to God. something that has come from the very depths of your heart - and it shows in evrey line.

great piece of work.

thank you very much for commenting on my work.

love and peace
shobhana

Again, excellent write. I love your choice of words. I'm not a religious person, but I understand fully what you mean throughout the whole poem. I love your similes and metaphors...

"If I had a son
I would love him more than parched
earth loves rain, than daffodils love
spring than life itself"

very powerful words....

"How can I not love Him?
For otherwise, I would die.
You ask why, and how, I love my Father
the Creator, Jehovah, God"

good choice of placement for the different names for God..I liked it.

5/5 keep up the great work!

As a writer i loved this peice

As a fellow Christian i loved it even more.

beautiful write
5/5

~GLASS~

....and this is my Commandment:

"That you Love one another.."

You seem to Seek to embody this in the bold vision of your poetic creativity..thereby beautifully displaying just whose child you are.....
You show your Love through your words.....

"In the beginning was The Word,
and The Word was with God,
and The Word was God...."

We can, indeed, use our Words to show our Heritage...and, from what I have read...this is your
intention ..and your Good Will is showing all over the place! Hooray!

I really enjoyed this poem, it portrays a very strong message, i especcially love the line 'the infinite crystalline kaleidoscope of snow flakes'
xx kim xx