Comments : Hatterras (Burmese climbing rhyme)

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great climbing rhyme and very descriptively done. i especially like the last line :"I thrive in the mist, salt-cured."

    it endorses the belief that " all the world's maladies find their cure in salt water - through tears and the ocean"

    enjoyed the read

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Enjoyed the poem. Words flowed and the climbing rhyme was superb. good write.