Dont worry sweetie i go through this also i sometimes wonder who i am and i know how that feels to be lonely like that and this poem has a strong message that alot of people can relate to so great job and excellent poem hun!
Beautiful sad penned with emotion written..."Nothingness is the soul of Being, That is why when we look for the soul we cannot find it. But sometimes when we eliminate all else, we find ourselves immersed in its sea. anyway, great penned once again...take care.
It begins to become hard to comment poems when I've read and commented so many, and I expect I've already repeated myself several times over :) However, excellent poem, it came across really nicely, and drew me into your feelings.
Wow, once again a great poem by a great writer. Keep up the amazing peices of work.
13 years ago
by Tara Kay
Hey, all your poems are awesome, you are so talented, as i read through them i notice your newest ones are better than your first but they are still good and amazing, we all get better at things. anaother great write.
I am astounded. Firstly because some as talented as you could ever doubt yourself and secondly because of the freedom and energy in this poem. I particulary like the way you repeated the mirror line it reflected how you saw yourself throughout the poem. The imagery was out of this earth and at time literally. I thought it was a tad too long but still well written...
Very sad poem. And I can relate aswell. I have to say this is one of my favorites by you. It was filled with alot of strong emotions. And the poem flowed really well. You did a great job on it. Keep writing. 5/5