Comments : Am I Here At All?

  • 12 years ago

    by Loulou

    Dont worry sweetie i go through this also i sometimes wonder who i am and i know how that feels to be lonely like that and this poem has a strong message that alot of people can relate to so great job and excellent poem hun!

    love always
    tabby

    ps thanks for the comment

  • Beautiful sad penned with emotion written..."Nothingness is the soul of Being, That is why when we look for the soul we cannot find it. But sometimes when we eliminate all else, we find ourselves immersed in its sea. anyway, great penned once again...take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by imnotlikethem

    That was awesome..........I write poems like that a lot ......I know what you mean.I'm sorry it took me a while to look at your poems.....keep writing.
    xoxo
    Cassie

  • 12 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    We all go Through this at times, you relayed your feelings well

    Thank you for your comments they are indeed ruff at the moment as I am trying new styles

  • 12 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    I use to feel the same way and I think I kind of still do. I don't know what's the real me because I've been living in my "own little world". 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sole

    It begins to become hard to comment poems when I've read and commented so many, and I expect I've already repeated myself several times over :) However, excellent poem, it came across really nicely, and drew me into your feelings.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 12 years ago

    by Latasha

    I really like this poem... very good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by †Undone♥

    This was a very good. poem. Not one I want to realate too, but i do. Perfect 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, once again a great poem by a great writer. Keep up the amazing peices of work.

    ~Joe~

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Hey, all your poems are awesome, you are so talented, as i read through them i notice your newest ones are better than your first but they are still good and amazing, we all get better at things. anaother great write.

  • 12 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    I am astounded. Firstly because some as talented as you could ever doubt yourself and secondly because of the freedom and energy in this poem. I particulary like the way you repeated the mirror line it reflected how you saw yourself throughout the poem. The imagery was out of this earth and at time literally. I thought it was a tad too long but still well written...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very sad poem. And I can relate aswell. I have to say this is one of my favorites by you. It was filled with alot of strong emotions. And the poem flowed really well. You did a great job on it. Keep writing. 5/5

    `Taleee xx