If I Were Unattractive, You Wouldn't Hear A Word I Say

by AGirlWorthFightingFor   Apr 1, 2006


The plain and pretty people hold a monopoly on the world’s attention because ugly people don’t identify with those who look like them Thank you, television Nothing makes a woman more pleased than seeing a woman heavier than her but only the insecure don’t understand why a guy would love a heavy girl instead of the prettiest Fat girls hate fat women who are brave enough to stand alone Fat guys won’t date women larger than a size 10 because of those comic book heroes and the women drawn out of proportion by guys who could never get a glance from the head cheerleader && it comes as no surprise that all the girls who identify with Christina Aguilera && sing along with all the songs written by guys they look more like && think they can be a star because they’re too shallow to be anything else && Everybody knows girls like her Everybody tells her she sounds like Amy Lee or Avril because they’re too afraid to tell her the plain ugly truth -- So she has to hear it from Simon Cowell Far be it for a fat person to know their limits but let’s be realistic Just because you can you should not do a nude scene Cellulite produces a gag reflex that ruins the romance for the obese audience because none of them are able to accept the fact that everybody has it because they can’t accept themselves because nobody accepted them You won’t be taken seriously until you drop all your defenses && let yourself be frightening and pathetic It takes courage to be foolish Put your true self on full display You won’t get attention by acting just like them Nobody wants to see a fake but if you open yourself up && let all those bottled feelings out People will identify with your pain We’re all built && grow a different way Beauty is a vain && doubtful, fleeting thing && even pretty people can show ugliness at times The soul is all that matters it’s who you are inside && other tired worn out cliché lines that everybody says but nobody really lives because the truth is when it comes down to it if I were unattractive, you wouldn’t really care

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    Brilliant. I really liked it - suppose cause its all true! And originally I was thinking "Wow... I wish this was set out in stanzas instead of a big block of writing..." but when I got to the end it was more fitting to have it as a big block because as you said - its a rant! Its one of those pieces that you sprout out when things push you over the edge and you say it all in one breath without stopping to worry about stanzas and structure and all the "pleasing to the eye" things. Good job. One suggestion tho - put a couple of full stops in there so you can tell where one sentence stops and the next begins. Good job. And now... to breath out and let my stomach flop over my jeans... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Omfg!!!!!!!! i just can't describe what ... how much thios poem effected me... it... oimg, it is soooooo good like, incredible... i, just, can't describe how much this has touched me... well, it's not really a poem but everything it said is so true if i could explain what i feel towards this work, i would, but, words just can't describe it. All i can say is that you did an increible job at portraying your emotions. All of the words you used, the truth to what you said, just... EVERYTHING. Incredbile. If i could, i would rate this poem 10/5 but, i can only go 5/5. Please keep in touch! Kepp writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
    ~stevie~

    I LOVE IT!