One question thats bugging me ur righting this as thing bout lolli but i thought i were over her and with erm katie? but here u say u wanna be close again? u meen friends or gf bf? anyway love the poem, full of meaning and the pain shows tho i hope that goes away soon, great rhyming scheme that doesnt mess with the message of the poem. flows superbly
ad really touches the heart.

You hurt me so bad
to feel like i was used
To even take my heart
and have it abused

i no how that feels. one critism that i prmoised i'd make today and seem to found one with u just write a little with more passion and put ur feelings in a little more to let the message come across better and make it seem a little like a story. it really is gd but i didnt want u to get coky so u no i gave a small meaningless crisism but i hope its helpful
love,
girl with no bloody name
ps. 5/5

Wow ur still on ehr..i am so sry..but i hope that you are learning ot fall for katie like you fell for her....good luck man anothe fabulous poem..please read my 8 new poems thnxs...

Lissa

Aww hun this is so amazing and sad aww, im so sorry you have to go through something like this, but this poem was beautiful really, i hope things getbetter for you, remember no matter what you'll find someone who loves u truly one day, dont worry too much if its meant to be it'll happen, aw

Got ur message but if u just wanna be friends and are over her then erm why you well writting these poems?

Omg! This was soooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I'm soooooo sorry that Christina doesn't realize that you are an amazing poet and great person....it's her loss totaly!!

Keep it up!
*(b)*

Good job..I like how you did your letters in poem formation..Sorry if that's a true story!
~Always4You~

Good job, david!! i know how you feel, cuz i've had the same thing happen to me.