Again, an amazing poem. I've read quite a few of your poems, but only commented on this, and the other featured one, and all of them have been truly excellent. that last stanza is my favorite, it has near perfect rhyme and rhythm. keep up the great work

Very very good poem.. i really enjoyed it. 5/5 keep up the great work

thanks for sharing
shannon

Very Beautiful!! It has such a deep meaning for such a short poem. You did a great job on it. The flow was amazing and the last stanza really brought it all together. 5/5* Keep up the good work!!

I liked that one, its nice, and flowed well. keep it up
xxxxx

This is very well written...good job.

Beautifully done

Took several reads to fully understand, but once i understood the meaning it was a well written message.

You gave as a gift to help me
Write the perfect poetry line
An image, didn't understand
But now it works just fine

^^ My favorite Stanza. This poem had a wonderful poem, and I enjoyed it a lot. 5/5

An interesting write, I did wonder what you were getting at until the last line, and it fell into place.

The second stanza seems to have some words missing in the first and third lines, but it might just be me...

Good job.

Wow that is awesome...again not much to say...5/5