Comments : Weather

  • 12 years ago

    by Catherine

    I think it should have ended in somethign that rhymed with cold, not 'weather you like it or not'

  • 12 years ago

    by Jaime

    ^I was going to say something like that. But if you just switch around the first two lines it will rhyme, plus it's a pretty cool tongue twister.
    Also, watch out for your spelling. The very first word should be "Whether" not "weather".
    Just work at it, it's really good already.