Comments : Feeling of Free

  • 11 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Juls,

    This is bloody amasing, the swtich of style the flow, the subject this is all blowing this fish out of the water! wow babe, wow. I'm so proud of you, you really turing into the poet your ment to be. Never give it up like me. This is frikken ace!!!!!

    Jenn

    Ps: Fave part

    Not visible to the forsaken eye

    Unable to see the truth,
    that was lied before their eyes

    Hidden, like an animal in the night

    Searching in light, but still
    cant be seen before their sight

  • 11 years ago

    by Fighter

    Stunning!!! wow.... im in awe. you truly are talented. keep up the phenomenal work!
    -xXx-

  • 11 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Oooh i really like ur poems! that one was very effective, the layout and wording was great! 5/5 xxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Feeling locked, caged in.
    Anything else but the feeling of free.
    [I loved those lines. They were really good! Also a great way to end the poem!]

    I thought the way you opened up the poem was great. It was a great poem from start to finish. Nothing I would change at all. Keep it up! You're a great writer!!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.