Outside she may not look happy
But there is a beauty within her walls
It runs through her veins
It pumps through her heart
It makes her feel loved, not lost and alone
The precious secret she once held
Was the love in her heart
But that love escaped
It is you she needs to embrace
There is this pretty girl
Hiding behind the tears
This shining star waiting for her moment
She cowers behind blades, and grips at her sleeve
She needs to break free of depressions grasp
Lowering her knife, making her life whole
(this is a different poem to what Iâ€™d usually write)
Wow girl! that's serious! ur life is much to special to throw away if that is what you are getting at. God has a plan for you and idk if u believe in him but he is my best friend and without him i could have never got through all the stuff i've been through. you've got talent alright...just let the good shine hun! All for him! -erica (if u have ne questions just email me! n thanx for the comment!)
First of all let me say...your amazing!
i have read a few of your other poems and they all are just brilliant!
you can express your, lets say, 'no so upbeat' emotions in this most beautiful ways.