Wow that was awsome. and alot of people fel that why. wanting to get out and be free. but never do anything.awsome.please check out mine. i love hear what you think about it.its call I SEE by: bianca.its kinda has the meaning like yours
First of all let me say...your amazing!
i have read a few of your other poems and they all are just brilliant!
you can express your, lets say, 'no so upbeat' emotions in this most beautiful ways.
Wow girl! that's serious! ur life is much to special to throw away if that is what you are getting at. God has a plan for you and idk if u believe in him but he is my best friend and without him i could have never got through all the stuff i've been through. you've got talent alright...just let the good shine hun! All for him! -erica (if u have ne questions just email me! n thanx for the comment!)