Comments : Beauty Within(not slang)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lithium

    Different but excellent hun!! this is really really good i liek ur flow and style its perfect xox me

  • 12 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    I really liked this one huni....5/5


  • 12 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    It's really sad. but it's so well written and i luv it off course!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by fallen princesa

    Dis is how i would describe my best friend im definitely feelin dis

  • 12 years ago

    by disenchanted

    This reminds me of me. Beautiful. I really loved it. Its perfect, everything..
    Its sad and hopeful.
    AmZ xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I loved it =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Geoffrey

    This poem touches every broken-hearted person...and i will surely inspire them....just keep up the good work....

  • 12 years ago

    by Sasha


  • 12 years ago

    by bianca

    Wow that was awsome. and alot of people fel that why. wanting to get out and be free. but never do anything.awsome.please check out mine. i love hear what you think about it.its call I SEE by: bianca.its kinda has the meaning like yours

  • 12 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ....and please, keep it down, dear Soul........

  • 12 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    It's kinda like how i feel...i luv it..5/5 luv ur writing...keep it up=)..

    with lots of luv


  • 12 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    Good work, that was really sad and well written....5....

  • 12 years ago

    by smile

    First of all let me say...your amazing!
    i have read a few of your other poems and they all are just brilliant!
    you can express your, lets say, 'no so upbeat' emotions in this most beautiful ways.
    great stuff!!!!!


  • 12 years ago

    by Kellie

    Hey i just love all of your poems they are all awesome :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    Wow girl! that's serious! ur life is much to special to throw away if that is what you are getting at. God has a plan for you and idk if u believe in him but he is my best friend and without him i could have never got through all the stuff i've been through. you've got talent alright...just let the good shine hun! All for him! -erica (if u have ne questions just email me! n thanx for the comment!)