Wowser, it's a very good poem, great ending line, it really tied it all up. The second stanza had the best flow. Keep up the good work.

It felt akward and everything seemed to jump around. Everything was good concept wise but you need a direction to start in and a diretion to end the poem with. 4/5

Beautiful...i loved it...nice work...
Emma 5/5

Lots of emotion, and you convey it well. nice work

Aw girl, I told him you called n he said he'd try to get back to you ... that was stupid of him and I smacked him on the head the otherday for it. I think he gets the point cuz I only talk to him when I'm mad at him n e more.

Love ya 4 eva and eva
Mia