Great imagery. I loved your description through poetry in poetry. =) 5/5 Excellent!!!!

I liked ths one too,i read fr u sme poems..this one is nice and perfect..u deserve 5/5..

You have such an amazing way with words. I am loving the last stanza, so unusual but still so effective at conveying your emotions.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

That was intense! I love it! You're an awesome writer, you have such a way with words. I plan to read much more of your poetry =)
Thanks for your comment on my poem.
Take Care,
Sarah-Joy