Wow...
this is written so well. and i know the pain you're feeling...but one day someone will come into your life who will never hurt you...
keep your head up
5/5
Lauren

Wow I can totally relate to this.. Amazing poem! =) Keep on writing!
And thanks for your comment on my poem.
God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

WOW this is a fab poem hun. and i know how you feel,
hope ur ok

Aw I love this poem.. I could definitely relate to it in almost every way. You did a really great job on this one & the way you ended it was very talented. Great job on this! 5/5**

Hey jessy! don't loose hope! relli nice poem tho!

Awwww cute poem, i loved it the first stanza is my favorite.. 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

OMG that poem is going to make me cry, i swear to god, your poems take the words and thoughts right out of my head, its amazing how alike your poems are with my world and my past experiences.. u are so most definetly in my favorites!!

**meggie**

Another very good poem. Was a little short, But you got to the point, And I loved it! I loved the 3rd Stanza. I could relate to that part a little bit. Keep it upp mmkay! 5/5

`Taleee xx