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Oh my god that poem is shocking...its so very very sad Holly. You have such a unique style of writing and I really think that you'll go far.
take care, lis
by Timothy r
I was speechless when I first read this last night, it brought tears to my eyes because of the way it was written in Noah`s person. The best I ave read in ages. Love, Tim
Wow did this really happen because it is a very said poem but still great keep on writing
This is incredibly beautiful and sad, Holly! It's so well written and it has an incredible flow...
Absolutely perfect, couldn't be written any better. Wow, I love it!
by Denise Butler
Omg!! This brought tears to my eyes, to write about that hideous woman, but oh the tears! great poem Holly,I can`t wait to read more. Denise
That was such a sad poem , it brought tears to my eyes .
It really makes you wonder HOW and WHY a mother could do such a thing ..
Such a heart touching write Holly . As for a title I think that one fits perfectly ....
Take care , my twin.....lol
As I always say, the early bird gets the worm! this is a terrible excuse for a play review.. I would definitely talk to your science teacher.
~SNUG~ peace out
by shobhana kumar
this poem is so strong with passion and emotion - it left me completely speechless.
the most beautiful part is the perspective of a child - no matter how harsh a parent is - their love is so unconditional.
by Lovely Bones
Wow that was very sad. You seem to have captured the moment very well. I really want to cry right now, especially since I've just read the article, but I'm not the type to cry at anything I read. Very good job on this one =)
Sad poem.... but its greaT!! keep up the work!!!
Gave me the chills...very honest and open