Comments : We're Watching Over You

  • 11 years ago

    by Lisa

    Oh my god that poem is shocking...its so very very sad Holly. You have such a unique style of writing and I really think that you'll go far.

    take care, lis

  • 11 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I was speechless when I first read this last night, it brought tears to my eyes because of the way it was written in Noah`s person. The best I ave read in ages. Love, Tim

  • 11 years ago

    by Dreamy

    Wow did this really happen because it is a very said poem but still great keep on writing

  • 11 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is incredibly beautiful and sad, Holly! It's so well written and it has an incredible flow...
    Absolutely perfect, couldn't be written any better. Wow, I love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Denise Butler

    Omg!! This brought tears to my eyes, to write about that hideous woman, but oh the tears! great poem Holly,I can`t wait to read more. Denise

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Holly ,
    That was such a sad poem , it brought tears to my eyes .
    It really makes you wonder HOW and WHY a mother could do such a thing ..

    Such a heart touching write Holly . As for a title I think that one fits perfectly ....

    Take care , my twin.....lol

  • 11 years ago

    by snuggles

    Nice work,
    As I always say, the early bird gets the worm! this is a terrible excuse for a play review.. I would definitely talk to your science teacher.
    ~SNUG~ peace out

  • 11 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Holly!!!!!!
    this poem is so strong with passion and emotion - it left me completely speechless.

    the most beautiful part is the perspective of a child - no matter how harsh a parent is - their love is so unconditional.

    beautiful.

    take care
    shobhana

  • 11 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow that was very sad. You seem to have captured the moment very well. I really want to cry right now, especially since I've just read the article, but I'm not the type to cry at anything I read. Very good job on this one =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Rich

    Beautiful!

  • 11 years ago

    by nekell

    Sad poem.... but its greaT!! keep up the work!!!
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ruth

    Gave me the chills...very honest and open