Wow i thought it was nice, ive never heard anyone write about this but it was a good topic and you did a nice job expressing emotions into a poem with a great flow 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

You did a great job telling everybody that the public school is a terror where fail, and pain, and misery would unite. You did an even better job of talking about the narrator's father chastising her for crying. Your depiction of school needs more in the way of examples. You have plenty of examples of the narrator's troubles with school while at home with family; however when speaking directly about schopol you describe it in abstract feelings/thoughts/emotions. Give more concrete examples that pull forth these things, like you did about ht ehome life of school. But do the same with the building life of school.

A good poem from a parents view. I can only imagine that it isn't easy being a parent. You really do tell how it must be. Good work.x

Amazing, you think of things so differently than others do, you are so good.
take care