Hey, yeah, I know, written for a contest... My contest:P I like it, it was good

Oh Lisa, this brought tears to my face, the thoughts of a swing, childhood, abuse, such a sad poem but well done the same. Beautiful. Denise

Hey this was really good i liked it a lot 5/5 keep up the good work!

It is awesome and keep up the good work.

Lisa, this is a wonderful poem! :)
keep it up... it was very inspiring ;)

Omg this is sad but powerful

Yes, written for a contest. My contest:Plol! Since you won 3rd place, I guess you know what I think of it:P

Great...yet slightly disturbing poem. A worrying well written piece. This shakes you to your core, it's written with such accuracy that it makes you believe it actually happened.
Another wonderful, spooky poem.
Keep up the good work.