Comments : Graffiti Backdrop

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    That's neat. I love it.
    I thought the flow, rythym and wording choices are all perfect. And I adore Graffit I think it is so amazing. Great Write.

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Outstanding!!!! This poem is a masterpiece in itself. You've taken an ordinary topic and made it into a poetic triumph. I adore this piece...especially these lines:

    "an oasis strictly in paint"

    "and with each magical stroke of the brush,
    is a story trying to break through."

    "expanding off the visual page."

    Truly awesome from beginning to end!
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 11 years ago

    by firexflys

    I am in love with your flow it's amazing keep up the amazing work your a very lovely writer 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Another good poem, and i really enjoyed it. its nice to read such good poems, well done
    xxxxx

  • 10 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Beautiful poem, the imagery was very sharp and powerful, keep up the good work!

    ~jas~

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was fantastic!!
    The imagery was astounding, and I thought this was very original.
    The rhyme scheme and flaw were flawless.
    Truly excellent work.

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Not my favorite because it didnt capture me as much as your others.. BUT.. just gramtically and structure wise it was flawless once again.. the flow and rhyme were spectacular

  • 10 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww i love this!! i think graffiti is wicked when done right. interesting topic. well done

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 10 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    I think in this one you got me.

    (: no one does poems about graffiti!. (except me)
    graffiti is more than just paint. fleeting ideas and messages that people are made to read. i loved this. coming from an actual graffiti writer.

    this poem has made it to my list of goodens. (:

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    It was very awesome, i mean the rhyming was great and it didnt seemed forced, you have a true talent so dont ever stop

  • This is interesting but in a good way. great work the flow could have been better overall it is 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, I like this one a lot! Greatly written poem, wit superb imagery.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Each mural tells a story,
    with each line another view,
    and with each magical stroke of the brush,
    is a story trying to break through.-
    ^truly excellently written.
    Topic is very unique.
    Well done, 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Omg this poem is amazing!
    i love the last stanza... only where it begins.
    you ended it perfectly.
    i loved it. it's an unusual topic to write about and i must say i've never heard anything quite like it in my life.
    the use of your words are brilliant i loved it
    5/5 much love .xx