I cant read your poems anymore..they make mine look bad haha...very good and touching...hope you get to take that walk...take care

Victoria

I cant read your poems anymore..they make mine look bad haha...very good and touching...hope you get to take that walk...take care

Victoria

I cant read your poems anymore..they make mine look bad haha...very good and touching...hope you get to take that walk...take care

Victoria

This is good, but if I can just make one tiny suggestion? I would say it's a little over-long, and there's one line that doesn't sit right:

As we feels Fall's air,
I feel we have more and more to share."

You've used a lot of really good description to set the scene, and that first line there is too short compared to the rest of the poem. Maybe "As we feel Fall's cool, damp air" or something?

Otherwise a nice poem. :-)

Whats the deal with you n prae? dating or what? i dont get it. anyway ya havent talk to you in days