Ooh i feel like this sumtimes...gr8 work lotta emotion i cood sence...5/5 again

Rory, one of your best pieces, i looooved it!! a lot of emotion, keep it up bud

heidi

This relates to me a lot! great job!

Sounds like a great song. great write!

I agree lyrics need to be read differently to poetry. This song certainly has fine lyrics. I feel like I want to hear the tune too. Very nice. Milly x