I absolutely love this poem! its so stong and the repitition in it really makes a point. a really inspiring write and i disagree with you that its "not great"! xXx

Yet another beautiful penned, writing well within good message, so inspirations written!!! "Remember, everyone you meet on the uphill journey is struggling with the mountain just as you are. You can never know what heavy burdens they must carry with them as they try to find their way. It serves no purpose to discourage, criticize, or judge anyone else. If you can help someone , do so, but never let your treatment of others add to their burden."

Best wishes to you and yours, take care. From West Perth.