Very good

Very nice, sad, but I liked it. The flow was good and I liked how it rhymes. :)

Soar = Sore =]

A very good poem though. Short but gets the message across. Keep up the great work. 5/5

`Taleee xx

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

Lindsay you did it
this ones worth a million
SOOO good so so sos osososososo good

OMG SO GOOD
>>MIA