Very good choice of what to write about. You made a very important impression in my heart with this poem, it was a great message. 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

Yet agian you write another great poem. This time I believe that topic would be hard to write, but you pulled it off. 5/5.
Now some where - some how a kid
just died - if only hes picked up the
phone and ask for a ride!
That line tell a lot to other that read it. People that underage drink should read this. I commend you on your writing.