Comments : They Keep Calling Me

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    I am a stranger to reality
    Angry voices calling my name
    Burn my bleeding ears
    Disfigured faces playing their game
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    I loved that stanza. And I loved this poem. It was really good. And the flow and rhyming were good also. A great piece. Keep writing, You have talent. =D 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 11 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wow. This is nice. Deep. 5/5
    XxXN-G-C-SXxX

  • 10 years ago

    by Elynnka

    "Mutilated hearts turned backwards"
    This was a very interesting line. I liked it for the originality of that expression.
    The poem overall was great!