Awwwwww, Jessy,,,this poem is sooo perfect..Every single word contains your expression well and i can imagine how you feel... Wonderful job and i really liked it!! 5/5

That was really good!!
I really caught the sense of anger and sadness in the poem..
Very good use of words there..
Well Done!
5/5

"with drops of pain" I LOVED that line. I loved this whole poem. You are such a great writer Jessy =P

Everything in this one seemed good. No faults at all. Tehe. Awesome job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Oh. I thought this one was abit sad. It was nicely written and full of power and emotion. I loved these lines the most though: "The pain within is too much to bear
My eyes are pouring out hateful tears"
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"Covering all my sadness
With drops of pain"

SO powerful. Great Job.