Holly Holly Holly!! You have outdone yourself here, this is very funny for sure. I am always happier after I read one of your poems, definitely turned my day around. Thanx, Love, Tim

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

O.K. Dear Daughter. Very well done. You will notice that I have failed miserably at that particular challenge. Can't seem to be able to take my imagination to your level. Always enjoy reading your stuff.

I liked it
it was a great fun poem
that shone though

i loved it

From
Lana

5/5

About as funny as leprosy.

Good work Holly, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep writing Sweetheart

Lol, that was funny

Love this one, too! You always end your poems with a bang, that's what I love about your poetry... They never die off at the end, like alot of other poems I've read... Your an incredible poet, Holly! ;o)

Hehe, good poem and very funny! But the best thing is that it is just different! Keep writing!
xx

(...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...)

LMAO! haha.. that was hillarious! the rhymes worked really well to bring the poem together and i loved each and every stanza.. nice one! 5/5

I like it. It sounds like it came straight out of Tim Burton's mind, therefore making it a good emulation. I'd love to see this girl, it would be a sight...I'll tell you. You did a good job keeping the comedic tone and light, fun atmosphere. YAY for girls with six arms!

Wow this is very cool
i liked it alot

lana