HA! finished. untitled though.

by Marissa Methanphetamine   Jun 17, 2006


Her looks are comlpetely decieving,
no one knows what lies inside,
its what she chooses to show,
and what she chooses to hide.

She hides it all under clothing,
no one knows she is hurt,
she acts just fine all the time,
leaving everything under the sleeve of her shirt.

But everyday she dies a little more,
she can't handle it,
she hates herself more all the time,
so she'll cut herself, just for a little bit.

Enough to take away the anger,
sadness, hatred, and pain,
enough to make her bleed,
enough to hit a vain.

The girl who looked so innocent,
but who is actually full of shame,
because of a broken heart,
died because he thought love was a game.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    You started good but you kept breaking the rhythm.
    It threw me off a little bit.
    4/5
    I still thought it was real good

  • 17 years ago

    by Robiie

    Thats really well written, you've made the words flow from one to the other and join into something with so much emotion and feeling, and it shows such truth, about so many of us, looking like something, but underneath the visual we are another

    well done girly and take care of yourself

    x0x0