I am speechless
great poem.

Olfat

This is a really good poem !!!
thanx heaps for commentingon mine ...it would be wild if you could look at some others ive done and just see what you think and ill keep lookin at yoru s
cheers
xx skye xx

Hey, that was probably one of the best poems i've read. It really evokes people's emotions and gets them thinking. Absolutely loved it.
ciao

I really like it it was well put together and thank you for comenting on my poem i would apreciate it if you could do the same for my others lol

Beautiful penned dear friend, it tell the right thing, the emotions nor passions, you amaze me with your brilliant penned, i'll enjoyed my visit. keep them coming and thanks for your wonderful comment on my stuff, much appreciate! have a great day. take care. bert.

This is nice! Great work!

I loved your use of words, so many comparissons
Great job, your on your way to becoming an awsome writer
Keep up the good work
Sarah

Great poem! Explains life for most people! Fantastic! - IdDiEfOrYoU

This was so fantastic! I'm like speechless right now! SO glad you requested I read! Wonderful choice of words, that made your poem so great!! Enojoyable read!
-Krissey

This was a great poem and very well written.

xoxo
~ Sydney

Woooww.... im speechless... one of the most powerful poems i've ever read... wooow....

This is a unique poem. Very creative and very deep. I enjoyed the read. Keep them coming. And thanks for your sweet words on mine, its very much appreciated.

You have alot of talent. I really enjoyed this

This Poem Is Like, Man... You So Young But Your Poems Are So Deep. And I Can Truly Relate To A Good Portion Of 'Em.Your Wording Is What Really Caught My Attention Though. You Definately Got A 5/5 Over Here.

Darrin

Hey its something new something not bad but i think u could do better and yes i speak only whats on my mind!

I think that you may not need to have experianced loss or change to understand some poems but if you have little imagination it can help!!

Very nice poem.
Gave a five x]

(Might I add; you make some LONG poems >.

This was exellent!
The imagery used was breathtaking and the wording was a pleasure to read.
I thought this was very creative and you did a wonderful job.

Omg!very powerful words!!!!luved it!!!