Comments : If I

  • 12 years ago

    by Olfat

    I am speechless
    great poem.


  • 12 years ago

    by skye

    This is a really good poem !!!
    thanx heaps for commentingon mine would be wild if you could look at some others ive done and just see what you think and ill keep lookin at yoru s
    xx skye xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Kobe

    Hey, that was probably one of the best poems i've read. It really evokes people's emotions and gets them thinking. Absolutely loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by InFaTuAtEdMiSs

    I really like it it was well put together and thank you for comenting on my poem i would apreciate it if you could do the same for my others lol

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful penned dear friend, it tell the right thing, the emotions nor passions, you amaze me with your brilliant penned, i'll enjoyed my visit. keep them coming and thanks for your wonderful comment on my stuff, much appreciate! have a great day. take care. bert.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is nice! Great work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Silentblond

    I loved your use of words, so many comparissons
    Great job, your on your way to becoming an awsome writer
    Keep up the good work

  • 11 years ago

    by IdDiEfOrYoU

    Great poem! Explains life for most people! Fantastic! - IdDiEfOrYoU

  • 11 years ago

    by Krissey

    This was so fantastic! I'm like speechless right now! SO glad you requested I read! Wonderful choice of words, that made your poem so great!! Enojoyable read!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sydney

    This was a great poem and very well written.

    ~ Sydney

  • 11 years ago

    by Fighter

    Woooww.... im speechless... one of the most powerful poems i've ever read... wooow....

  • 11 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This is a unique poem. Very creative and very deep. I enjoyed the read. Keep them coming. And thanks for your sweet words on mine, its very much appreciated.

  • 11 years ago

    by Alli Prater

    You have alot of talent. I really enjoyed this

  • 11 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    This Poem Is Like, Man... You So Young But Your Poems Are So Deep. And I Can Truly Relate To A Good Portion Of 'Em.Your Wording Is What Really Caught My Attention Though. You Definately Got A 5/5 Over Here.


  • 11 years ago


    Hey its something new something not bad but i think u could do better and yes i speak only whats on my mind!

  • 11 years ago

    by Esther

    I think that you may not need to have experianced loss or change to understand some poems but if you have little imagination it can help!!

  • 11 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Very nice poem.
    Gave a five x]

    (Might I add; you make some LONG poems >.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was exellent!
    The imagery used was breathtaking and the wording was a pleasure to read.
    I thought this was very creative and you did a wonderful job.

  • 10 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Omg!very powerful words!!!!luved it!!!