Very good well... this is the last poem i read of yours cause you have no more... ..all of them were 5/5 believe me i think your great and your way beyond 5/5 if it could go higher you would be voted on an way higher level great!!!**:)im looking forward to see any of your new poems ill be cjecking up on ya
GREAT**!

Checking** lol i spelled it wrong

Very haunting. Wondefully penned. I love the style. Loretta

Beautiful, enchanting piece of poetry.
5/5

[tragic]

Very descriptive, captivating poem!

Love this one, it's now one of my few favourtes. I wish i could write dark poems, no just read them. My darkest one is "depression" on fictionpress.com but it's not really anything good. Nothing like your greatness.

Cosmicstar(aka Talia)

Becautiful poem!!! Your write had perfect imagery and alluring words...Congratulations on winning the contest. Keep up your wonderful work!

Thats awesome!

It's an awesome poem, I really don't understand why the rating is so low, probably there are a lot of jealous ppl out there T_T
Good work! 5/5

Man! What an amazing poem...very dark but totally amazing. Great job!
~Jules

WOW...i toally admire ur work. i've been writing since...idunno when but that was amazing. wish i could write like that

Jeannie! I can't believe I haven't commented on this one! You are a true poetess, dear friend and this piece is its testimony.

beautifully done!! And very well done for making it to the top of the charts!

love, hugs and peace
shobhana

I like this poem a lot, it's creative. :)

Swirling rot in earths decay...

You have excellent imagery. The poem was executed well, and I would love to read more.

Wow, that was the most amazing thing i have ever read. to know that someone has such a talent is fantastic. everyone keeps saying that it is dark, in a way yes, but the beauty overlaps the darkness.

AMAZING

I feel the darkness and sadness, which I am sure your have intended. Let me hope it is only in your imaginatgion. I do like the effort and effect it gives me. Joe

Couldnt understand what was happaning

AMAZING!!! thats all i have to say. Great job and keep it coming!!!

Trying to be like Edgar Alan Poe? Please, you are not even close to Ed!!!!

5/5

im captivated.. trapped inside a mist of darkness..waiting for the kiss of death.. delieveredby the fog mistress..

absolutely great..

~pilar ann