Comments : Fog Mistress

  • 11 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    Very good well... this is the last poem i read of yours cause you have no more... ..all of them were 5/5 believe me i think your great and your way beyond 5/5 if it could go higher you would be voted on an way higher level great!!!**:)im looking forward to see any of your new poems ill be cjecking up on ya
    GREAT**!

  • 11 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    Checking** lol i spelled it wrong

  • 11 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very haunting. Wondefully penned. I love the style. Loretta

  • 11 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Beautiful, enchanting piece of poetry.
    5/5

    [tragic]

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very descriptive, captivating poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Solnya

    Love this one, it's now one of my few favourtes. I wish i could write dark poems, no just read them. My darkest one is "depression" on fictionpress.com but it's not really anything good. Nothing like your greatness.

    Cosmicstar(aka Talia)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Becautiful poem!!! Your write had perfect imagery and alluring words...Congratulations on winning the contest. Keep up your wonderful work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Dylan

    Thats awesome!

  • 11 years ago

    by Elynnka

    It's an awesome poem, I really don't understand why the rating is so low, probably there are a lot of jealous ppl out there T_T
    Good work! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Man! What an amazing poem...very dark but totally amazing. Great job!
    ~Jules

  • 11 years ago

    by just*some*gurl

    WOW...i toally admire ur work. i've been writing since...idunno when but that was amazing. wish i could write like that

  • 11 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Jeannie! I can't believe I haven't commented on this one! You are a true poetess, dear friend and this piece is its testimony.

    beautifully done!! And very well done for making it to the top of the charts!

    love, hugs and peace
    shobhana

  • 11 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    I like this poem a lot, it's creative. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Audrey

    Swirling rot in earths decay...

    You have excellent imagery. The poem was executed well, and I would love to read more.

  • 11 years ago

    by Iris

    Wow, that was the most amazing thing i have ever read. to know that someone has such a talent is fantastic. everyone keeps saying that it is dark, in a way yes, but the beauty overlaps the darkness.

    AMAZING

  • 11 years ago

    by Joe Eijyuu

    I feel the darkness and sadness, which I am sure your have intended. Let me hope it is only in your imaginatgion. I do like the effort and effect it gives me. Joe

  • 11 years ago

    by Scream_my_name

    Couldnt understand what was happaning

  • 11 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    AMAZING!!! thats all i have to say. Great job and keep it coming!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Darlene

    Trying to be like Edgar Alan Poe? Please, you are not even close to Ed!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by pilar ann

    5/5

    im captivated.. trapped inside a mist of darkness..waiting for the kiss of death.. delieveredby the fog mistress..

    absolutely great..

    ~pilar ann