Comments : Fog Mistress

  • 12 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Truely a work of a poem master.. it was soo vivid.. it was beautiful.. yet it had something to it.. something more beyond.. words.. hard to explain i suppose.. its was great

  • 11 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #3:
    Once again, I've commented on this a long time ago...but I can't help but leave another one because it's just so good! I really don't know how you come up with so many new and unique are so talented. I just wish I could write as well as you! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 11 years ago

    by Resonating Hope

    OMG!! This is amazing! this poem is an imbodyment of talent! I love is so much

  • 11 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Such imagery! That was a great poem. I love:

    She rapes the air with claw like hands
    Gnarled fingers toil with greed
    Smothering all with murky bands
    Leaving her putrid brood to feed

    I can actually see her hands in my mind. Great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Really nice.