Comments : A Midwest Wake Up Call

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Profound in it's simplicity. It's rare for me to read three lines and find myself engrossed by them, but that's just what this piece did.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 10 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Wow...That was so short, yet it caught my attention instantly and never let it go, even now Im still sitting here thinking about it. Those were the most powerful three lines Ive ever read. Such a strong picture was painted with such few words. Great job!

    ~Mo~

  • 10 years ago

    by I Love You

    Wow this is a great haiku! i really liked it a lot 5/5