Beautifully written :)

Imagery was awesome, poem flowed well, made me smile, was calming and pleasent, well done, I thought it was well written.
xxx

Biscuit --
I think that this was definitely a plus for your poetry ;; it was great. Though I`m not a big fan of nature poems, it wouldn`t be fair to dock you for that. So I gave this poem a 5/5. The flow throughout the three stanzas was perfect ;; no better way to say that. The theme was a bit subtle ;; but it was clear enough that the reader can still grasp the intent. You did a really good job on this one ;; keep it up! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Very nice job. Keep working at it. Your getting better with each poem I read. Loretta

Aww how cute this is! A wonderful nature poem; it really brought great pictures to my eyes.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This poem makes me think of home (England) but wants we wonder how it makes you feel. I think to do this you need one last stanza to express your thoughts on the subject.

Other than that it's just peachy. Even, slow, thoughtful and patient.

Hehe i loved this poem! it was soo good! another master peace!!!
Thanks for the comments on my poem it means alot to me

Keep it up 5/5

One thing hard to find is a good nature poem, You did a wonderful job!!!!! 5/5