This was beautiful I think her husband shall be punished. Because of him that child never got to see his first birthday or have his first tooth pulled. All because his daddy didn't love mommy anylonger.
I loved your word choice, it was brilliant, appropiate, and poetic. I also liked the theme of your poem, and the way it's written, very original. I really could imagine everything you described, and it made me feel a little sad about it.