I admire your style, in my opinion its all in its own. The way the 3 parts come together, its balance. its really good

I thought the imagery in this was beautiful. I liked the way you used 3 stanzas they came together well. I especially loved the vocab choice in the second.

A sliver of light
shot like a silver arrow-
the moon rises up
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Loved those lines above!

This was a really nice set of haiku's. They were beautiful. Nice imagry also. Wonderful job! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``