Hmm, it was different I can give you that much. Though it seemed like you just grabbed a bunch of ideas and crammed it into one. It was a good poem though. It just needs more thought. Rhymes and flow were good.

However not ever poet is suicidal
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I think "Ever should be every"
Just an opinion

Other then that, i loved this poem it was definiteyl different, really unique i loved the imagery..it was filled with great emotions! great job 5/5