Wow this is so simple but yet so captivating you way of using words are great the flow of this was awesome i like the feelings that you feel when you write this one . im trying to find something wrong to tell you but this is perfect to me a simple poem with a deep feelings i like this one hope to read some of your works

Gene Ross

Wow! I love all the similes in this-The message you conveyed is so clear and simple, yet has a depth to it---5/5 Keep it up-

Great comparisons, alliteration and rhyming with a strong rhythm as well, excellent poem

-biscuit-

Awww..this was very sweet, and it definetely appealed to me! your descriptions and metaphors were good and made me smile.. all your rhymes worked making the poem flow well! nice job! 5/5

David --
I gave this poem a 5/5 for a couple of reasons. First of all, the flow was terrific. There wasn`t any spelling or grammar mistakes, which is definitely a plus for me. The rhyming changed after the first stanza, but because you didn`t make a habit of it changing, I`m not going to dock you for it. Overall, you did a wonderful job! Thanks much for sharing this with me! It was great. =D 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Wow... deep and meaningful. could use a bit of work (the last stanza seemed a bit forced) but i still love it, as always. keep up the amazing work!
-xXx-

Good job, nice emotions, and powerful word choice... keep it up

Wow, very well written. I think we all have felt that sentiment at one time or another. Very good tone,flow. excellent 5/5 Loretta

Not my favourite of your works.
First and second stanza were mind blowing, but the third! Let you down. If you can reword it to keep the flow constant then the whole piece would be terrific.

Simple, genuine, captivating. loved it. <3