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by Pure Silence
Julie, this is a sweet poem and I bet your friend loves this. her dad sounds like a great man. this poem is one of your best and I arelly liked this stanza:
That a father is missing out
On his daughters future years
Living a tick at a time
Just wishing he was here
by Choose xX Alex Xx Life
So nicely expressed dont mess wit this its fine as it is i loved it :):):):)
the poem was good :):):):) will ya comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as poss thnx hunni xxxx alex xxxx
by twisted reality
AWW! I know EXACTLY how you feel! My friends' dad died not too long ago too! =( It was horrible to attend the funeral...
Anyways...I thought this poem was really good! The flow was excellent, and it had great meaning. =) 5/5 xoxo
always the best at it!!!!
Keep writing poem,u r the BEST! 7/5
hmm,and wut about me?
i want one,like in the old time!
much luv xoxo