Comments : Hero in the sky

  • 11 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Julie, this is a sweet poem and I bet your friend loves this. her dad sounds like a great man. this poem is one of your best and I arelly liked this stanza:

    That a father is missing out
    On his daughters future years
    Living a tick at a time
    Just wishing he was here

  • 11 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    So nicely expressed dont mess wit this its fine as it is i loved it :):):):)

    the poem was good :):):):) will ya comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as poss thnx hunni xxxx alex xxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    AWW! I know EXACTLY how you feel! My friends' dad died not too long ago too! =( It was horrible to attend the funeral...

    Anyways...I thought this poem was really good! The flow was excellent, and it had great meaning. =) 5/5 xoxo


  • 11 years ago

    by kkly

    Hehe juls,,

    always the best at it!!!!
    Keep writing poem,u r the BEST! 7/5

    hmm,and wut about me?
    i want one,like in the old time!


    much luv xoxo
    kly aka