Hey nice poem.. I like it :)
Great job!

This poem is really good!!!!!! I understand what it feels like to lose a friend, quite a few actually....... Youre a really good writer! KEep it up!

~JAy~

I've never a lost a friend this way. It's a horrific thing to experience but you conveyed it well, emotionally and sensitively. It's a good piece. Good Luck.

Jemma

This is way good I wish I could have stopped my friend from dying. But I am getting better. Things will get better I promise. thanx for commenting on mine.
Keep writing I like your stuff

~~this is a really good poem i read most of yours ther really good** comment me on sum of mine plzzzz!
^* thnx*^ ~~**Makayla**~~

Just thought I would return the favor. I read this one and I must say it's very touching. I really like it, I can somehow relate. Keep up the good work.

When i red ur poem, i went back to when my grandad had died . it was so much like this poem . i layed next to his bed and kissed his head and when he died i made 1 last wish and that wish is sumthink no1 wil ever no , but it took me back to that place and i love poems that drag u into a different world . i loved this poem cause it dun that . keep up the good work and rate my poems and leave comments plz .. all my love dani xx

Aww that is so sad, it reminded me of people I have lost.. it was a very touching poem and it brought tears to my eyes *doh.... very well written another 5/5 xx

Omg this so good it reminds me i was in the er i have some promblems but anyway my beat friend was always there by my sidebut great poem 5/5

Sarah

That was so sad. 5/5

Wow, you keep on amazing me with your wonderful style in writing!!

Omg that is such a nice poem it is really sad u r an excellent riter keep up the good work...

Lovely.
I almost cried....

Very sweet. 5/5