by RainbowSlider Aug 15, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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A desert covered in ocean; |
by Isabella
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Keep up the good work XD |
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Great job, really catchy and well written and tied together with big words lol. Keep up the good work. |
by sibyllene
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Heh, i like the first 4 lines. they catch the attention, which is good in a poem that appears to be longer - it gives you will to read on |
by sibyllene
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Heh, i like the first 4 lines. they catch the attention, which is good in a poem that appears to be longer - it gives you will to read on |