Thought I might leave a comment, just so you have it in writing and, despite that, I'm too lazy to vote right now, though I will rate it in the comment for evaluation purposes, etc.
You might want to work on your grammar and spelling [amongst many other things]. Also, youâ€™re stanzas are inconsistent and the poemâ€™s structure isnâ€™t sound. But other than that it was great effort.
Wow. I gave up cutting tonight. I helped myself and I got rid of everything. But that doesn't mean i'll never lose my mind and do it again. I liked the poem a lot. Its quite similar to a book I read the other day called Cut.
You had me captivated to read on at the first line - Cut deeper' My body tingled with horror and by trhe end I was almost in tears.
I remember self harming before the age of ten. I remember feeling so angry, helpless and out of control. Hurting myself seemed to release/ relieve my pent up frustrations.