I gave you a 4/5. I thought that the poem wasn't really flowed all the well, and some of the lines went too long, while others went too short.

[What you think of me now...before]

^^I really didn't understand that line...It's talking about now, but before...Before what? And I don't understand how you can talk about 2 tenses at the same time. It confuses people. Keep up the writing! =) 4/5 xox

Samantha

Aww this is a really sad but sweet poem. it had emotion in it and it was good.

But do you still think its not to late
To hold me like you did if I was up late?

having 2 lates at the end threw the poem off a little. maybe try a different word for one of them? i dont know it just didnt seem right.

but it was an great poem =] 5/5