I gave you a 4/5. I thought that the poem wasn't really flowed all the well, and some of the lines went too long, while others went too short.
[What you think of me now...before]
^^I really didn't understand that line...It's talking about now, but before...Before what? And I don't understand how you can talk about 2 tenses at the same time. It confuses people. Keep up the writing! =) 4/5 xox