Comments : If there were a way

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Goding

    wow, seems you've had alot of broken hearts in your time.

  • 13 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    wow, that was excellent! you did another brill job on that
    gave it 5
    well done xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Heather Clark

    wow this poem is like reading my feelings, its deep great job! *HEAther

  • I know how you feel in this poem, it has real depth, i really enjoyed reading it

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    wow great poem i can totally suck!!! well not all but great poem 5/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah


  • 11 years ago

    by Vanessa

    A wonderfully written sad write. A broken heart never seems to heal. So it is amazing when it fianlly does. The emtions were really strong, and the flow was flawless, Great job on the vocab, and word choice. 5/5