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  • 12 years ago

    by Daniel Goding

    Im surprised to see such a low rating on this poem, I see nothing wrong with it, my favorite type short, lovely, and meaningful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelsey

    I know exactly how that feels because you're emotions were really well described.

  • 12 years ago

    by Emily

    great poem amazing like i said aboiut ur other one great job

  • 12 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    An interesting poem with certainly some great words and repetition, lacks a better structure however. It has a reasonable flow and some originality. A good poem! Keep writing and be strong!
    luv kt

  • 12 years ago

    by crystal

    great poem!! i can relate.
    crystal