Comments : Vigorous Tears

  • 11 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Yes, very sad.... the beginning draws you in, and you want to keep reading even though it's sad. mm, i pray for you and your family

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Such a sadening write! so much emotions are expressed throughout this piece. i hope that one day this wound he has left behind will find some kind of peace and heal. amazing write.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 11 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    This poem has really touched me. I can't personally relate, but I have some friends who can and I know how it has broken up their lives. This is a beautifully sad poem and by the way you wrote it I can tell that you love your family very much.

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 11 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    How sad... It really shows deep and true emotion, and even though it sorta rhymes, it's still a really good poem!!
    Thanks for entering!!

    Ciao < 3

  • 11 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Are you still entering for my contest [titled contest just a single word]? if not i can unreserve it and judge what was entered there. becuz we're just waiting for the ppl who reserved and who wants to reserve. so yea.

  • 11 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent! This really touched my heart greatly. You have done an amazing job putting this to verse. This brought me to tears. You are in my thoughts and prayers. Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    This poem really hits home. Happened to me a lot when I was little. If it wasn't my dad it was my mom. I guess they're better now, but the memories are still there. As for the poem. I loved it. Perfect in every single way. I like how you portrayed the prayers of the children, then of your own. Excellent write indeed. i love it! never stop and keep strong!x

    Liz =]

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Oh so much hurt in this poem. pleading to many ppl. well god. this was very heartfelt poem. it made me think about it all. how much ppl close to you mean.

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a sad write...and so true for so many. The little ones are left to suffer....Very emotional.....Keep up the good work. All the best, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Heartbreaking. I know many people can relate to this poem. I like the way you incorporated a prayer into this piece, very unique. Nice job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This poem is so gripping. You did a wonderful job on it. Each word was filled with such emotion.
    Perfectly Penned.
    It brought tears to my eyes.

    Elaine.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was brutally honest and very sad...I could feel a lump forming whislt reading.
    The vocabulary was a treat, the imagery creates vivid pictures and the flow is flawless.
    The ending has huge impact, and was a perfect was to wrap the poem up.
    Beautiful writing on such a sad story.

  • 10 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Aww this one made me cry, i don't know what to say, this was an amazingly written poem, so filled with emotion, it was wonderful

    brittany (MD)

  • 10 years ago

    by Autumn

    This poem really speaks to me. I actually have a friends whose mom's father beat and raped her every night, and finally at the age of 14 had the courage to speak up. Then she had to take a lie detector test, and she failed, while her father passed. Isn't it sad that the world has come to this? Where we can't even come to love or trust our own fathers?
    -Autumn

  • 10 years ago

    by Jorge Luis

    I'm no doubt loving this poem, and no worries because the prayers will not go unanswered....God bless...5/5...:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem is so deep. realy nice work.. your work is appriciative..